Thursday, June 21, 2012

The Doctor

I went to the doctor with my dad and we had to wait in the waiting room. Then we went to the doctor’s room with my dad we sat down. My dad
talked to the doctor, he said, “my boy has a sore ear”.The doctor had a look at my ear and he said, “it looks red inside your ear”. The doctor gave me medicine to take home.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Kori-Lee,

    You produced some excellent blog posts last week. Sorry it has taken me so long to comment, I have been busy checking off all the student's netbooks.

    What an amazing picture you have drawn in tux-paint, I can see that you are quite the artist. What I like the most about your writing is that you have used speech marks to show that people are talking in your writing. This is very clever. I hope you are going to use speech marks in all your writing now.

    Keep up the great work Kori-Lee,

    From Miss Szymanik