In the holiday I went to my Nana’s house ,then we went to the warehouse.
I got some shoes then we went to bakery. I got a pie then we went
to my Nana house then I had my pie then we had a iceying cookie.Then
we watch a movie then we went to speed then we went to go shopping.
You had a busy day that day, I can see why it is so memorable.
ReplyDeleteWatch that you vary your sentence beginnings Kori-Lee.